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Friday, March 6, 2020

Sea Monster Story. By Sonny.

By Sonny.

once upon a time there was a beach then the time started going fast and then on the news a scientist said that there was a speed timer on a unknown sea dinosaur in the dark blue ocean.


 then everybody was going nuts because they thought that they would die then one day it stopped then everybody thought that it went to a cave and they were right it was inside a cave trying to find some meat he and found a whale shark then some divers went diving to find out what it looked like and it was blue and spotty on the top. 


and then after they had a waterproof camera and took a photo of it and then went to a museum and it was a sea museum and they showed the science lab owner in the museum the picture then he said hmm.. interesting and then the divers said really?


 then the owner said wait a minute! 
that is the sea dinosaur then he looked at it and saw some other divers then they were coming in the secret lab then they started to have a fight of who took the photo first then another scientist came and yelled "CALM DOWN!!" 


then they started to calm down then the owner said i will pay you 78'00'00'00 dollars for it and i will add it in the museum. 


then they said okay sounds good then they got the money so they splitted it in half then they both spent it on scuba diving gear. 

but they said we need a home! but thought they spent all there money on the scuba diving gear so they said why not we go in the ocean try find some treasure? then the other 2 said sure!


 and 1 of them had 1,000,000 dollars left so he said lets buy a boat! and a home then the others said i'm down then they went to a show home then they said we like this one then the house seller said ok sure!

 just pay me the home is worth 200,000 dollars is that a deal? so they said we shall have a tour first the the house seller said okay then come on in and I will show you around. then the divers said "we like this one the most sir!" then they payed the price then they walked to a car dealership and bought a 7 seated range rover.

then the dealer said this car is 50,000 dollars good sir so do we have a deal? then the divers said yeah sure! we love this car the best so the dealer said just come into my office and sign the paperwork so they did and then the dealer said wait.. do you have a licence? then they said "uh.. no?"


then the dealership owner said "you need a drivers licence to buy this car, if you don't know what they are"
and then they said "we don't have a licence but we can drive quite well!" then they payed then the owner said let's walk out and see if you really can drive then they drove as good as they could and then they were allowed to purchase the car so they did then the dealer handed the keys to the divers.


 then they drove to the beach as fast as they could so they went to go see the sea monster and they went really deep and they saw the sea monster but it was poisonous and 2 died from the baby sea monster and then the other 2 died from drowning then they never got to go diving again and in heaven they were missing the ocean really bad they begged people to take them to the ocean then 1 of them said "I will!"

and then they got to get trolled then they couldn't come back to anything then they went to a place with nobody and they only had a home and a island and they wanted to go home so they screamed really loud and every minute and then they felt like they had

 a saw through and then they wanted to watch television but they couldn't because they were in space so they had none internet.


 and they had to have a space helmet but they were actually having a dream in there beds and then they had some fun swimming and then they went to another country called "Amglazia" because they were sick of hunting for goodies to make a fortune so they said "lets go to another country!"  and then they got lost there in a jungle. 


They had no idea where they were. The end.


 

11 comments:

  1. Wow Sonny what a story, and what a imagination you have! I love the way you kept the story interesting with all the descriptive detail and exciting adventures. It’s lovely you could share this story with us and it’s neat to see how proud you are of your long story too. Great work Sonny 👍😊

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  2. may be you code make your wods biger

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  3. amazing job sonny that one off the best storys i have ever read. good job in adding lots of adjectives. you could make bigger words. you have down well to spell almost every word right. :) :) :)

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    1. thanks, Samuel i'll make bigger words next time. :D

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  4. Very exciting and sad at the same time. I wondered what was going to happen next. I would jump out of a plane (with a parachute) or try to save someone that needs rescuing or help. Something useful: before you post your writing could you use "read write" and listen to where the full stops could go in. Let me know if it helps.

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  5. i love your writing sonny its AMAZING.i like how you worked so hard on the story. next time you could add more full stops.

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    1. thanks. i'll do that when i can.

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  7. hi sonny cool story and a fun read can you make more please :P

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    1. Hello, Logan! i'll make more soon! :P

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