Once upon a time, there was a man's birthday, Jeremy. his parents ordered him a pineapple cheesecake, with delicious fruit. They come to pick it up and then the cake is randomly dripping, they thought it was normal and then they put it in the fridge and then they hear rock music coming from the box.
They were concerned, because they knew that their son would never listen to rock music, because he likes jazz songs. Though they checked then they went up to his bedroom upstairs, and then they see him playing toy cars.
They asked him "hey Jeremy" "Yeah?" "Do you hear that rock music and do you know who it is? His father said. Jeremy said "I don't know what your talking about. I've heard nothing but silence since you left!"
"Oh" His father said. "Well, I'll check up on you in a few minutes." Then Jeremy went back to playing with his toys. Then he goes to grab a snack from the fridge but then he sees a lot of light coming from the fridge!
When he opens it up, he sees that there's nothing that's lighting up. He decides to call a detective, they see little cake crumbs! The detective says "I think that the cake is cursed!" Father said "Yeah, yeah I don't think so".
Father kicks him out. A day later it's Jeremy's birthday They go to open the cake, and there's only one slice. And then they see the cake crumbs again. Then they follow them and all of the cake slices are all dirty!
Then they look around the rest are the same and then they go to look at the cake box again and then the cake slice they see is clean! Then it fades into the ground and becomes a lot of cake crumbs. Then they see the face then they smash the cake. and they live happily ever after though not the cake sadly.
Hello Sonny. Awesome story, I like the part were rock music is coming from the box its strange the way I like story's. Next time you can use a bit more adjectives other then that great story!
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