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Friday, August 7, 2020

The Hunter And The And The Pirates.







One day in the mysterious jungle. A brave hunter was hunting in the very deadly woods, he found a abounded ship house by the shore . He wanted to explore it, but he knew it isn't smart. He explored it then he saw creepy pirates he accidentally knocked over a barrel did he make it home?
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 2, 2020 at 2:45 PM

    Hi Sonny great story maybe you can write if you thank the pirate gets home but how did he get to the ship house?

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  2. BeckySeptember 11, 2020 at 2:42 PM

    Hi Sonny, Great writing. The hunter really was brave to go into the pirate house. I am wondering if he escaped or if the pirates heard him knock over the barrel. Good work.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 28, 2020 at 2:27 PM

    Hi sonny I like the pirate house story great writing. My favorite part was when he saw creepy pirates. Maybe next time you could do a bit more about the pirate house. Have a nice day.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 18, 2020 at 1:49 PM

    Hi Sonny i like your pirate house story bub maybe next time you can tell us more about if he made it back home.

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