In the deep blue sea, way down deep, down under the sea, in a place like another universe! The tropical place was where everyone was calm friendly and calm . Well everyone BUT the sharks, krakens, hammerheads, aqua whales, you name it.
Tuesday, September 22, 2020
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Hi Sonny. Well done on the story. I like the way you described the deep dark ocean. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteHi Sonny. I like your story I like the way you describe the deep dark ocean. Maybe next time you could describe more. Have a nice day!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Sonny. I like how you used lots of describing words. It reminds me of a story that I wrote. Maybe next time you could try describe a little bit more of the picture.
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